craft follow up message (American English, very casual fitting a dating site, proper sentence case, and with a call to action) to this message I sent 3 hours ago: Just a girl by the pool, reading and hoping to meet someone interesting. My friend suggested

Hey there! Just lounging here, and I can’t help but wonder if you’re up for a little poolside fun. How about we kick back with some cool drinks, trade stories, and maybe even splash around a bit? I’d love to see if you can make me forget about my Kindle for a little while! What do you think?