The text you provided is mostly grammatically correct, but there are a few minor adjustments that could enhance clarity and fluidity. Here’s a breakdown:
1. "house clothing (domestic clothings)" - "Clothings" is generally not used in English; instead, use "clothes".
2. "Deets:" - This is informal but can be acceptable in casual contexts. If a more formal tone is desired, it could be replaced with "Details:"
3. "serving as a jacket" - This is


