Yes, the text is grammatically correct but could be improved for clarity and flow. Here’s a rephrased version:
"I texted you privately to ask for your help with photoshopping my picture. I’m the one wearing a white blazer. Please remove my colleagues who are standing beside me, but keep my lecturer who is looking down and writing on a piece of paper. Additionally, I’d like to see another version with a different background. Thank you in


