Your original text is mostly grammatically correct, but there are a few adjustments that could improve its clarity. Here’s a corrected version with some rephrasing:
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**Revised Version:**
I love love. I love the idea of loving someone and the actions that come with it, as well as being loved in return. Genuine love exists, my friend. Love will remember both you and me.
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**Expanded Version in Everyday Language:**
I have a deep


